Kimmychu ([info]csiny_sl) wrote,
@ 2008-05-22 01:16:00
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Entry tags:fanfiction, one-shot

Flashlight [complete]
Another total PWP, and it’s probably way more kinky than Pick Up 101. This one was impromptu and written in a half hour so if there are mistakes, me sowwy. Pleased be warned you may never see a certain everyday object the same way ever again. *lol* Enjoy, horndogs, and thank you for your reviews!

Fandom: CSI:NY
Author: Kimmychu
Rating: FRAO (the *ahem* enlightening kind)
Pairing: Danny/Flack
Content Warning: In/appropriate use of an everyday item, depending on your perspective.
Spoilers: Extremely tiny one for episode 4x20, only for D/F.
Summary: There are many uses for a flashlight, and Danny and Flack experiment with one particular way … Danny/Flack kinkiness.
Disclaimer: The kinkiness belongs to me. Yep.



The flashlight was … perfect.

“Oh, my God, Don.”

Sshh, are you hurtin-”

“No, oh fuck, no …”

Flack licked his lower lip, drew in a breath.

Then, he slowly pushed the black, metallic flashlight in and watched Danny’s lithe body swallow another inch of the object. He could feel Danny shuddering beneath his hand, his right hand that cupped one side of the CSI’s ample buttocks and knowing how much Danny was enjoying this sent a shudder rushing through his own body.

More.”

Danny’s hoarse murmur seemed as loud as thunder to Flack.

“Don … gimme more.”

He helplessly stared at Danny lying prone on the bed before him, at Danny clutching tight at the beige-colored pillows, at Danny with his face buried in those pillows and that bubblebutt thrust up into the air. Straight at his face.

Why didn’t they think about doing this sooner?

“Danny, it’s already half-way in,” he rasped.

Danny was struggling up onto his hands and knees now, and it took everything Flack had to maintain a poker face. Damnit, now was not the time to think a naked Danny with a flashlight up the ass was funny. Well, it was kinda funny, but it was fucking hot to him as well.

Flack drew in another breath, a more deeper one.

Watching Danny play with himself, be it with his fingers or a dildo, was one thing. Watching Danny using the regular flashlight that the guy brought along to crime scenes as a sex toy was really, really something else.

And he was the only one who ever got to touch it and use it aside from Danny.

Fuck.

“I want more.” Danny was gazing at him from the corners of heavy-lidded, sultry eyes. “Give all a’ it to me.”

Flack’s toes curled.

“Okay, babe, okay.”

Flack stroked the stretched skin around the black flashlight and smiled at Danny’s low moan. Yeah, he loved listening to Danny’s moans and whimpers, and when Danny got what he wanted, Danny moaned good.

“Anythin’ ya want, babe, ya got it.”

The flashlight slid inside another inch, and another.

“Oh God, ohmyGod …”

Danny had bowed his head again, tossing it from side to side on the pillows, his fingers clawing into the bedsheets, arching his back so sinuously like that and spreading his legs so wide -

The flashlight slid in one more inch.

And then, Flack was blinded.

His first instinct was to close his eyes and turn his head away. His second instinct was to open them a moment later to figure out what the hell happened. Squinting his eyes, he glanced in the vicinity of Danny’s bottom.

The amused laugh that burst from his mouth surprised even himself.

“Whu?”

Danny’s baffled murmur only served to make him laugh harder. His eyes were tearing up by the time he directed his fingers into a variety of arrangements, trying his best to create believable-looking shadow shapes on the bedroom wall behind them.

“What the … Doooon!

Flack’s laugh transformed into an all-out cackle fest.

“Oh, babe, this has gotta be somethin’ new even for us!” Flack gasped between laughs.

Flack toppled over onto the mattress next to Danny, unable to do anything except lie there and be shaken by his uncontrollable laughter, giving the bed weak kicks whenever it got too much for him. Opening his eyes and seeing the circular ray of light dancing all over the wall while Danny attempted to look backwards while still on all fours did not help him one bit.

“Oh my Goooooood -”

“Oh yeah, you switched the flashlight on with your ass!

If there was a sound that Flack delighted in more than Danny’s moans, it was Danny’s joyful laughter. Danny’s pearly teeth flashed in the diffused light of the bedroom.

“Yeah, I’m a man of many talen-”

All of a sudden, Danny’s eyes widened and his mouth gaped.

“Oh shit.” Danny’s eyelids fluttered. “Oh, it’s in deep, it’s hittin’ it right there …”

Flack’s higher processes shut down. He grabbed Danny by the upper arms and maneuvered the other man onto his back, sensing the violent tremor that rocked Danny from head to toe the instant Danny was supine. His left hand skimmed down Danny’s heaving chest and belly, straight down to a very hard, flushed erection.

“Ahh, fuck, that feels good … fuuuck …”

Flack didn’t think, he didn’t need to. His body had become so attuned to Danny’s that his hands moved on their own volition, one squeezed around Danny’s cock and pumping up and down just the way Danny liked it, the other gripping onto the flashlight and carefully twisting it to rub against that sensitive spot inside Danny.

After Flack discovered just how sensitive that tiny inner part of Danny was, Danny never had a damn chance against his skillful fingers ever again.

Ooooh fuck …”

Danny’s eyes were closed, his brows furrowed and mouth in an ‘O’ shape under the onslaught of pleasure. Danny’s shoulders and torso were tense, stiffening in readiness for the inevitable climax.

“Oh God, I’m gonna come -”

For the first time since they began their relationship of being much more than just friends, Danny was utterly silent throughout his orgasm. It was something else that was new to Flack, and he prolonged the experience as much as he could, committing every visual and auditory detail to memory, of Danny convulsing, of Danny staring back at him as white semen painted the lean swells of a flat abdomen.

Danny was fucking beautiful without any masks.

Flack wasn’t sure how long Danny’s hand had rested on his thigh.

“What ‘about you?” Danny asked softly.

Flack blinked. Then he glanced downwards at his groin, realizing what Danny meant.

“Don’t worry ‘bout me, babe. Your pleasure’s mine, remember?”

Danny’s tender smile caused something in the left side of his chest to skip a beat.

Flack blinked again, and noticed Danny was already holding his flashlight in his right hand. Damn, and he’d wanted to be the one to take it out too.

Nevermind. There’s always a next time, if Danny’s pleased expression was anything to go by.

“What are ya smilin’ ‘bout?” Danny murmured, his blue eyes warm.

Flack plucked the flashlight from Danny’s hand. He gazed at it with a smirk and a raised eyebrow.

“Ya know … I think I’ll keep this one.”

Danny snickered, his eyes warmer than ever.

“Yeah. Then ya don’t hafta keep askin’ me for one anymore.”

Flack let a few seconds pass, then grinned, his eyes as crinkled with mirth as Danny’s.

“Well, wouldn’t hurt if ya brought an extra flashlight or two to crime scenes in the future. I mean, the next time we could end up losin’ a few up your greedy bu-”

Flack never got to finish his sentence.

Danny was, after all, a master at shutting him up with kisses, and he was just fine with that.



Fin.





If ya wanna know what inspired this story, it was a scene from episode 4x20:



At a crime scene, Flack asked Danny for his flashlight, and that was all it took! Hahah!

(Thank you to [info]elsiekate for the screencap!)




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[info]surfingangel
2008-05-21 06:39 pm UTC (link)
I. Love. You.

This was freakin' fantastic!!!

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[info]surfingangel
2008-05-21 06:41 pm UTC (link)
Oh and by the way, if you wanna have a laugh at the whole flashlight thing on a whole 'nother level, check out the loveline video of Carmine. :P

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:13 am UTC (link)
*LMAOLMAOLMAO*

I swear to God, I did not know about Carmine and flashlights before I wrote this story. BWAHAHHAAH! Hilarious beyond words.

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[info]surfingangel
2008-05-25 03:26 pm UTC (link)
Which is why this is SO much better if you've seen the vid. I know you hadn't seen it, but the fact that it was joke on Loveline and then that happen on the show, is priceless!! :P

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[info]1csimfan
2008-05-21 06:43 pm UTC (link)
Oh yeah, when he checked under that taxi for the cracked oil pan. :D

OMG..that was...hot and then hilarious. The image of Danny on all fours and shining light on the wall from the flashlight up his butt while Flack's making shadow puppets. ROFL

Just what I needed to brighten my day and kill time until the finale. Good one, Kimmy.

Edited at 2008-05-21 06:43 pm UTC

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:14 am UTC (link)
Heheheh, glad you enjoyed it! :D

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[info]beaniesheppard
2008-05-21 06:56 pm UTC (link)
You know what else it made me think of - a certain someone someone's obsession with flashlights when he was answering that question on Loveline... *g*

Great fic hun. The flashlight coming on was a nice touch, I've got to say... *laughs*

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:16 am UTC (link)
Hahahahaha! I couldn't believe what a coincidence it was! I honestly did not know about Carmine and flashlights until the comments to this post mentioned it.

So funny.

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[info]jetpack_angel
2008-05-21 07:05 pm UTC (link)
Extremely hot.

And... *gasps for breath* utterly hilarious.

You are awesome.

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:16 am UTC (link)
Thank you! Glad you liked it. :D

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[info]elsiekate
2008-05-21 07:21 pm UTC (link)
*lol* Very kinky, and very funny.

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:23 am UTC (link)
Wahahaha! :D

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[info]supercaptain182
2008-05-21 07:25 pm UTC (link)
Hot! Fantastic...amazing. I can't leave a large comment, because this is too hot for words and has literally stolen my breath! Great job. *g*

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:23 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed the story!

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[info]laminy
2008-05-21 07:47 pm UTC (link)
This is hilarious, and hot, and pretty much simply awesome. I loved it. I really did. And I too became interested when Flack borrowed Danny's flashlight, but I definitly never thought of this! I'm happy that you did though.

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:24 am UTC (link)
Gotta wonder just how many times Flack has asked Danny for his flashlight, eh? ;> Thank you! Glad ya liked it.

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[info]matalinolukaret
2008-05-21 08:26 pm UTC (link)
I totally picture Flack getting so distracted by making shadow puppets during sex. But then my brain died. :D ♥

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:25 am UTC (link)
*LOL* Yes, Flack is a dork like that.

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[info]e4blonde
2008-05-21 08:49 pm UTC (link)
Aaaw don't you just love 'em.

That was fab hun! Only half hour!! Blimey, you are good!

Flack looks so demanding!
Plus there is only one man I know who can pull of a ensemble in THOSE colours...

Is it me or are those trousers cupping Flack?

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:27 am UTC (link)
Hahahah, Flack always looks demanding when it comes to Danny, if ya get my drift. >:)

Ya know, until you mentioned Flack's pants, I was too busy looking at Danny's moobs but now I'm too busy looking at Danny's moobs and Flack's groin. Hahahah!

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[info]romalo
2008-05-22 03:28 am UTC (link)
LOL! bottom!Danny? Check. Funny? Check. Silly/adorable!Flack? Check. Hot? Oh yeah. With the bonus of kinkiness? You've reduced me to a pile of goo. I so gotta watch that episode again lol. :D

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:28 am UTC (link)
Heheheheh, thanks, I'm happy you liked the story. :D

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[info]bambiblake007
2008-05-22 03:31 am UTC (link)
yeah, as soon as i read the first line, i thought of Carmine in his loveline vid on youtube :)

i loved it. the light comin' on was great. flack makin' shadow puppets, hilarious. i could totally see it all in my head, lol.

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:29 am UTC (link)
Poor guy, if he ever found out about this story, he'll probably freak. *LOL* ;P

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[info]miss_blue1
2008-05-22 04:02 am UTC (link)
I will not look at Danny in the same way. Whenever I'll watch NY I will just see a light coming out of his ass.

Loved it! :D

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[info]miss_blue1
2008-05-22 04:05 am UTC (link)
Oh yeah..did you see Carmine's interview with Loveline? If you didn't I think there's a link in the Ceesau thread at Talk..

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:30 am UTC (link)
Bwahahahaha! After all the comments mentioning it, I had to! Such a coincidence, man. I truly did not know about Carmine's obsession with flashlights before I wrote this story!

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Whenever I'll watch NY I will just see a light coming out of his ass.


Now that's one unique superpower right thur.

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[info]razorbladegirl
2008-05-22 05:50 am UTC (link)
The icon just says it.

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:31 am UTC (link)
*LMAO*

Flacklight! How appropriate!

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(Anonymous)
2008-05-22 06:56 am UTC (link)
I freakin' love it!!!! :D Don Flack, you are one dirty, dirty man. Danny Messer, you are one saucy, teasing little Kinkapoodle. >:D I can totally see Flack wanting to play with all the cute little CSI toys Danny has. ;) Bet the sight of those gloves on Danny's hands turns him on, too. >:D

I love that Danny's ass turned on the flashlight! Flack would so laugh at that. :D He's lucky he didn't get in trouble for that, heh! I love his last little comment, about Danny's greedy butt. LOL!!!!!

Very, very nice dirty story--so perfect for our pervy boys. :D

:) K

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:32 am UTC (link)
Mwahahaha, indeed, Flack is a dirty man and Danny is a saucy, teasing kinka-poodle! >:D

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Bet the sight of those gloves on Danny's hands turns him on, too. >:D


Oooh, me thinks another kink!story is in order ...

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[info]outa_chan
2008-05-22 09:46 am UTC (link)
i never knew a simple flashlight could be so kinky.
they're lucky to have all the equipment they need. ;)

thanks for sharing this ^__^
I like it!

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:33 am UTC (link)
Let us hope they clean it well afterwards. *lol*

Thank you! Glad ya liked it.

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[info]dutchgirl71
2008-05-22 10:59 am UTC (link)
OMG that was awesome! It was both hot and hilarious at the same time.

*snorts*
Flack making shadow-puppets :)
Great!

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:33 am UTC (link)
Wahahahah, I'm happy ya liked it! :D

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[info]prncssflutterby
2008-05-23 01:24 am UTC (link)
HE TURNED THE FLASHLIGHT ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*dies of laughter*

OMG this is funny!

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:34 am UTC (link)
*lol* Glad ya found it funny! Although I must admit I was expecting more reactions of, "OMGWTF?", hahah.

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[info]prncssflutterby
2008-05-25 11:04 pm UTC (link)
Honestly... I started out in Joss!verse (Buffy & Angel). What happens when the vampires gets kinky? Well lets just say this was incredibly hot and kinky and I loved it to bits. But nothing I hadn't heard of before.

So here you go hun... OMGWTF??????? *laughs* light shooting out his ass *LMAO*

Totally fic rec'ing this one when I make my next fic rec post 'kay?

Honestly this was fab!

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[info]reisha_lynn
2008-05-23 10:38 am UTC (link)
0__________________________________0



*dies from choking on laughter*

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:35 am UTC (link)
Hahahahah!

Your comment made me LOL. Glad my story made you LOL too. ;P

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[info]byrons_brain
2008-05-23 08:43 pm UTC (link)
Oh just wonderful! and very funny.....

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[info]csiny_sl
2008-05-25 06:36 am UTC (link)
Thank you! :D

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[info]lessientinuviel
2008-05-25 11:26 am UTC (link)
ROFLMAO!!! Dude, you're lucky I wasn't drinking anything, otherwise I would've spit it out all over my laptop because I was too busy giggling at the mental picture of Danny with lights shooting out of his ass.

I'm laughing like crazy just thinking about it right now... This is all your fault, Kimmy. That mental picture is burned into my head now. It's gonna be all I can think about all night...

Ahem. Great job with the writing, though. ^^

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[info]talulababy
2008-05-25 03:38 pm UTC (link)
HOTHOTHOT!!!

Dude, I can't look at flashlight the same again. XD

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[info]prncssflutterby
2008-05-27 02:30 am UTC (link)
And I did fic rec this one too in my newest fic rec post, here at my journal.

OMG this one needs to be printed out at some point to read on vacation, later this summer!

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